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戴云教主的共享空间欢迎参加研究生直通车和高中直通车推荐 戴云教主的新书《托福iBT语法精要》 《托福ｉＢＴ词汇１００００》 November 23 SSAT考试概况及复习时间攻略
转载：“词以致用”—— 从《新概念3》词汇学习谈英语写作能力的提高“词以致用”—— 从《新概念3》词汇学习谈英语写作能力的提高 很多人在英语学习的过程中经常被这样一个问题困扰，且往往百思不得其解——平时花大量时间背诵单词，然而待到动笔之时，能“派上用场”者却寥寥无几，即便用上若干，对其正确性仍旧缺乏信心。没少下功夫却换来这样一个结果，着实让学习者产生强烈的挫败感。在这里，我们即将讨论两个问题：一，造成这种后果的原因何在？二，如何通过《新概念3》词汇层面的学习，将这个问题解决掉。 为了弄清问题的原因，我们首先要从众多学习者对背单词的“背”字的理解入手。对于绝大多数学习者而言，所谓的背单词，就是记住所学单词的音、形、义，除此之外再无半点扩展。诚然，对音形义的掌握是学习单词的第一步，对语言学习的作用不可忽视。然而，掌握语言的最终目的却在于“运用”，而音形义任何一方面的记忆都没有上升到“用词”这个层面，而英文写作却是考察学习者综合运用词汇的项目。这样看来，英语学习者对词汇掌握的程度和写作需要学习者具备的能力之间的落差便导致了文中开头提到的那个棘手的问题。 那么，如何突破仅限于“音形义”的单词学习方法，上升到“用词”这一高度呢？我们在这里介绍一种“词汇搭配学习法”，即把单个词汇扩展到更大单位，即短语的学习方法，从而帮助学习者掌握新学词汇使用的场景，以及前后的搭配情况，使得语言的学习更为模块化，并最终促进学习者综合运用词汇能力的提高。下面我们以《新概念3》的词汇学习为例，向大家介绍这种方法，其中着重介绍写作中经常使用到的四种搭配，即名词+动词，形容词+名词，动词+名词，动词+介词。 （一）名词+动词 这种搭配结构从语法的角度分析属主谓结构，即掌握了此种搭配，在写作中便可写出一个句子。如: They will hardly know which facts to select from the great mass of evidence that steadily accumulates. (L38) 对于逐渐积累起来的庞大材料，他们几乎不知道选取哪些好。 此句中，无论是evidence还是accumulate对于学习者来说都应该是新词，单独识记效果欠佳，若能掌握evidence + accumulate 这个搭配，则能在写作中游刃有余。又如： The curtain went up on the final act of the play and revealed the aristocrat sitting alone behind bars in his dark cell. (L22) 大幕拉开，最后一幕戏开演，贵族独自一人坐在铁窗后阴暗的牢房里。 这一句中，curtain和go up 也是很实用的搭配。 （二）形容词+名词 此种搭配在写作中也是经常运用的，通常在一句话中充当主语、宾语、表语或同位语。下面这句中两个形容词+名词的搭配分别充当了表语和介词宾语。 Punctuality is a necessary habit in all public affairs of a civilized society. (L60) 准时是文明社会中进行一切社交活动时必须养成的习惯。 又如： Kidnappers are rarely interested in Animals, but they recently took considerable interest in Mrs Eleanor Ramsay's cat. (L19) 绑架者很少对动物感兴趣。最近，绑架者却盯上了埃莉诺.拉姆齐太太的猫。 此句中，除搭配记忆considerable和interest者外，还应将前面的动词take和后面的介词in一同识记，以便掌握更大的语言单位。 有时，搭配学习的范围，还应扩展到句子，正如下句中，应当将There was tremendous excitement看作一个完整的语言模块。 The sea-bed was scoured with powerful nets and there was tremendous excitement on board when a chest was raised from the bottom. 他们用结实的网把海床搜索了一遍。当一只箱子从海底被打捞上来时，甲板上人们激动不已。 （三）动词+名词 此种搭配的掌握可以帮助学习者轻松完成句子中谓语和宾语的写作，只需加上适当的主语，便可以写出完整的一句话。也可将其中的动词变为非谓语形式，在句子中充当成分。如： Insuring public or private property is a standard practice in most countries in the world. (L43) 承办公共财产或私人财产保险是世界上大部分国家的正常业务。 此句中，insure property这组搭配使用了动名词形式在句中充当主语。 又如： Despite its immensity, it is both simple and elegant, fulfilling its designer's dream to create 'an enormous object drawn as faintly as possible'. (L17) 尽管此桥很大，但它的结构简单，造型优美，实现了设计者企图创造一个“尽量用细线条勾画出一个庞然大物”的梦想。 fulfilling …dream使用了fulfill的现在分词形式，充当状语。 又如： Newspapers exert such tremendous influence that they can not only bring about major changes to the lives of ordinary people but can even overthrow a government. (L45) 它们不仅可以给寻常人家的生活带来重大的变化，甚至还能推翻一个政府。 此句中，exert 和influence则直接充当整句话的谓语和宾语。 （四）动词+介词 此种搭配可分为两种情况。第一种，该动词为不及物动词，需要添加合适的介词后才能接宾语。如： When my mother had died after a tragic accident, he did not quickly recover from the shock and loneliness. (L57) 当时我母亲在一次事故中惨死，父亲未能很快从悲痛与孤独中恢复过来。 recover 为不及物动词，需要加上介词from方可接宾语。 第二种情况，动词为及物动词，但需要在宾语后添加适当介词才可以添加宾语补足语。如： Dimitri immediately went to Aleko's house and angrily accused him of stealing the lamb. (L16) 迪米特里立刻去了阿列科家，气呼呼地指责他偷了羔羊。 此句中，accuse为及物动词，但要想表达“指责某人做某事”这一含义，需要在宾语him后加of才行。 “词汇搭配学习法”提高写作能力的原理在于，通过掌握更大的语言单位，提高学习者综合运用词汇的能力，从而提高学习者遣词造句的能力。在《新概念3》中，以上介绍的四种搭配不胜枚举。这里旨在抛砖引玉，以期通过方法的介绍帮助学习者提高学习效率，提高写作水平。（ 一篇满分范文People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge).Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The demand of qualified professionals in society drives the development of higher education, and attending college or university, which is an important channel of outputting talents, is no longer a dream for the majority of families in China. Some people think it natural to attend college or university after high school; others may have specific reasons for doing so. From my point of view, there are some common viewpoints of entering college or university.
Acquiring knowledge is undoubtedly the most important reason for entering college or university. A university is a place where not only provides general education, but offers specific discipline instructions as well. Especially for those who expect to have great achievements in academic area, university education is definitely the vital part of the systematic education path. Young adults can find university a free environment to learn and at the same time, they find esteemed professors to follow. Therefore, People choose to entering college or university to broaden their understanding of life and deepen their knowledge of any specific area.
As the world becomes increasingly complicated, the talents have been redefined and more demanding requirements have been raised. Going to college or university, which equips people with extensive knowledge and certain skills, can prepare young adults for their career pursuits. For example, young person who is not determined on career path can take different courses, or ask for help from the career center in his university. A four-year university education can be a good start for a person’s career, or even a turning point in the whole career path.
In addition to the reasons mentioned above, many others consider university education a unique life experience. Colleges or universities attract people with diverse backgrounds. Even some world famous universities enroll students from every corner of the world. Why are there increasing people studying overseas？Why do more and more universities in different areas or countries set up exchange programs for students? The key answer is exchange of mind. Immersing in another culture can not only broaden people’s horizon, but also understand different thoughts and behaviors. And in that way people can easier and better cooperate with others in global context.
Everyone has personal goals. Some people attend college or university for promoting intellectual ability, some are for finding decent jobs, and a large number of others are for different life experiences. Broadly speaking, we can not exhaust possible reasons for people entering college or university, but there is no doubt that they pursue higher education for fulfilling themselves. November 16 欢迎你为陶然小朋友投票戴老师 您好! 陶然现在正在参加长沙市教育局举办的一个评优活动,欢迎你到网上给他投票,你打开网址:http://news.changsha.cn/2009cszt/200909x/18/,就能看见陶然的照片,点击照片下的投票,按提示给陶然投票.还请你发动身边好友一起给陶然投票喔.谢谢! 陶然小学跳了一级,出生于1998年7月,他的英文已经在2008年9月过了全国公共英语等级考试的三级(听力`口语`笔试全过),小学阶段参加过很多的英语类的比赛,取得:全国青少年英语口语技能大赛一等奖,全国青少年电视外语口语大赛一等奖,"友阿杯"金奖等好成绩. 另外,他还获得过"涉外杯"作文一等奖,数学是他的强项,仅六年级就获得过:华罗庚金杯赛的一等奖,走进美妙数学花园金奖,数学大王特等奖等. 还曾获得过星海杯钢琴比赛三等奖,"友阿杯"书法类银奖,智慧之星书法类三等奖. 欢迎您为陶然投出您宝贵的一票. November 14 再次晋升一位高级佛（高二同学）的公告热烈祝贺！听说都很棒，读写都不错：） 根据教规和你的优异表现，我决定晋升你为本教的高级佛，并号召广大教徒向你学习，争取早日圆满！ 天下所有学校任你申请啦！ 再次祝贺你！ 戴云 From: sirius.95@hotmail.com To: daiyunjiaozhu@hotmail.com Subject: RE: 向教主请教 Date: Tue, 10 Nov 2009 16:22:36 +0000
感谢教主辛勤栽培，来领取封赏来了，虽然作文分不高，总分还行吧...大作文good，小作文fair ZTF9025 徐子毅（高二） From: daiyunjiaozhu@hotmail.com To: sirius.95@hotmail.com Subject: RE: 向教主请教 Date: Wed, 16 Sep 2009 14:24:18 +0800 你的独立写作几乎可以得满分了！ 很棒！坚持！ 戴云 From: sirius.95@hotmail.com To: daiyunjiaozhu@hotmail.com Subject: RE: 向教主请教 Date: Tue, 15 Sep 2009 09:21:50 +0000 感谢教主赐教，请问独立写作要打多少分才合适？ 我还有多大差距？ 黄一黄一，永放光芒！ From: daiyunjiaozhu@hotmail.com To: sirius.95@hotmail.com Subject: RE: 向教主请教 Date: Tue, 15 Sep 2009 12:04:29 +0800 写得不错！ 别太在乎词的难度：） 等你的好消息！ 戴云 From: sirius.95@hotmail.com To: daiyunjiaozhu@hotmail.com Subject: 向教主请教 Date: Sat, 12 Sep 2009 07:48:14 +0000 01ztf9025教徒徐子毅（高二）请教主批示习作 字数和时间还可以但是感觉很少能用上特别漂亮的词， 求助。。。
旅游要不要有导游陪着？ As modern society develops, profoundly does recreation influence people's life quality. At this time, traveling is becoming more and more crucial and this is where the controversy arises. Some believe the best way to travel is to be in a group led by a guide. Others who disagree with it cite that traveling alone provides us more freedom. From my perspective, the latter one is more reasonable.
Among the reasons why I hold that opinion is that while traveling alone without guide, people can project their own schedules which are more flexible. Life abounds with examples. Once our family made a trip to Beijing in a group led by a guide, which was totally a tiresome rather than a relaxation. Astonished were we when we got our timetable of the day which said we had to get up at six in the morning and spend only half an hour on each sight. Almost all the day were we rushing from one place to the other. Due to this trip, we decided to travel alone next time without joining a group. During the next journey to Harbin, we got up whenever we want and spent more time on the place we were interested in and less time on those we felt bored. This time we felt that this is a real trip. From these experience I learnt how impropriety to travel in a group.
The second reason I want to put forward is that when we travel alone, we can play more since we have no time limit. If people go to a place of interest, they must be enthralled by some of the sights and show no interest on others. Thus, if there is no fixed timetable, they may spend more time on those that captured them, which will make them feel enjoyable rather than pay equal attention to every sights. In the contrary, within a group, people have to follow the principles and cannot have their own choices, which may have negative effects on their mood. The comparison directly leads us to conclude that traveling alone greatly overweigh traveling in a group.
Many drawbacks though traveling in a group led by a guide obtain, some minor positive aspects should not be left out. For one thing, since there is a guide leading the tourists, they can learn more about the sight they are visiting, which may increase their knowledge. For another, they might get to know new friends for there are so many people in a group, which may be a fun experience. Nevertheless, these merits seem ignorable when compared to those of traveling alone.
All in all, based on the above analyses, it is obvious that the advantages of traveling alone are more essential to every tourist. Only in this way can they have a true vacation rather than just go around the city.
劳烦教主大驾。。。 教主万寿无疆 November 10 再次晋升一位佛的公告没问题！
尽管放心大胆申请！！
另外，根据教规和你的杰出表现， 我决定晋升你为本教的佛，并号召广大教徒向你学习，争取早日实现人生的圆满！ 祝一切好！ 戴云 Date: Wed, 4 Nov 2009 22:45:54 +0800 From: paugasol_#￥%@163.com To: daiyunjiaozhu@hotmail.com Subject: 教主， 麻烦看看我托是否要重考啦~~谢谢 教主好啊 ~~~~
我今年大三，暑假上了您的强化班~~~ 收益不是一般的匪浅呀~~ 可是因为功课紧张，作文没有时间准备，以致integrated部分一篇没写就上了考场，没有考好实在对不起您啊~~~~5555555
我的情况是这样滴：
1 重点大学工科专业，想申请美国前100大学；
2 10.18号一战托福 阅读26， 口语22， 听力29，作文25 总分102；
3 问题出在ETS给的评价，口语的12题是 GOOD，34题是 FAIR, 56题是LIMITED 啊~~~~~原因是我以为3456很简单，就练了一天就上场了....结果全记下了，但讲得急吼吼的，拉了不少重点信息。
这样有个LIMITED教授会不会不要我呢?
先谢谢教主拉！！！ 在美国读高中一年有用吗？From: coco.vi**@hotmail.com
念一年高中没什么好处：（
在美读一年高中没什么用！
还好！O(∩_∩)O谢谢：） 必须全力以赴哦！ 祝好！ 戴云 再次晋升一位教主助理的公告子彦，祝贺你呀！
根据教规和你的优异表现， 我决定晋升你为本教的教主助理（呵呵，和你现在说的不一样，没有见习期哦：），并号召广大教徒向你学习，争取早日实现人生的圆满！ 也希望你能写点经验谈（越细越好），给后来的兄弟姐妹们参考：） 再次祝贺你！希望并且相信你能进入自己理想的学校！ 戴云
Date: Thu, 5 Nov 2009 22:48:49 +0800 Subject: 10.18 TOEFL iBT 110 From: eurekamaggie&……*@gmail.com To: daiyunjiaozhu@hotmail.com 教主好！ 我的成绩单在附件里。
教主有何吩咐，尽管直说！
教主见习助理 赵子彦
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November 05 转帖教徒记载的教主语录---just for FUN2007-11-16 20:04
October 16 我的托福：“一个激动”，迎来质变
托福高分心得：全神贯注于自己的考试
October 13 托福作文的难题教主好啊！最近肯定挺辛苦的吧，再忙也要注意身体哈，呵呵 上完您的课已经一个多月了，最近在看作文的笔记及相关的材料，完后心情激动、热情澎湃想要实行三步走计划了，即您所建议的写出来，写正确，写漂亮。 但在刚写了一两篇作文后，就遇到了一些困难，那就是作文审题还不是很准确或者我根本不知道题干要求我写什么东西。审题这关没把好，那么肯定是会跑题的，最后一定是finish egg 了。我把具体情况说下吧， Do you agree with the following statement? Nowadays, people are putting too much emphasis on appearance and fashion . Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 题干的意思究竟是要问我是不是同意这种说法呢？如果是，如果我同意，那我应该写一些具体的事例来证明这个观点确实存在的，即人们过多重视外表和时尚。 如果题干是在问我是否同意人们 过多重视外表和时尚，那我就应该答过多重视外表和时尚所带来的好处或者坏处。 按照字面上来理解，似乎是第一种情况可能性更大，但是按照直觉以及参照您上课时所讲的方法，第二种出题思路更符合出题规律和逻辑，而且这样显然对于写作难度要低一些。 问题就是上述这些，非常感谢您百忙之中抽出时间查看信件，希望能尽快得到您的答复。 谢谢！ 黄一黄一，永放光芒！ 戴云教主，万寿无疆！ 仍在黑暗中摸索前行的虔诚教徒等待教主智慧光芒的照耀  2009-10-08 13:14
这是问有没有这种情况。如果认为有，就举例证明。如果认为没有，那就说明人们并不过分，说明为什么需要这样做。 这个题目确实非常难，考的频率也极低。若不能理解，可以放弃。 口语复议成功祝贺你！ 真是令人鼓舞的好消息！ 根据教规和你的杰出表现，我决定晋升你为本教的佛，并号召大家向你学习，争取早日实现人生的圆满！ 等你更好的录取和奖学金消息哦：）
戴老师， 您好，我复议成功了，口语加了4分。谢谢您的建议。
在2009-09-16 15:01:31，"戴云" <daiyunjiaozhu@hotmail.com> 写道：
101分要重考吗？呃 首先声明。。。并不是很高。。。但是已经达到我一战对自己的要求了。。。上了大学确实英语退步太多了 复习了大概一个月。。。感谢教主的作文要求 作文确实写了很多字 大概独立作文是650左右
报分： 阅读 29 听力 25 口语 22 写作 25 教主我要不要重新考一下呢 我个人想重考。。。毕竟还是想申请奖学金的。。。ps：我大三  2009-10-13 13:22
祝贺你哦！这个成绩很好啦！达到任何学校的要求！ 好好准备别的吧！文书，GRE，还有学校成绩，发表文章，做项目，弄个什么奖！ 根据教规和你的杰出表现，我决定晋升你为本教的佛，并号召大家向你学习，争取早日圆满！ 再次祝贺你！ October 08 99个冷知识——不保证完全正确，可探讨（摘录）
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